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2. I didn't receive any feedback on the last elevator pitch because I didn't submit one.
3. Again, I couldn't change anything because I didn't submit a first one, but I did try and lay out my idea clearly. I introduced myself, explained my idea, and provided info on the size of the market in question to show that this is a viable opportunity.
Connor,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you presented your idea without hesitation and it seemed that you were well knowledgeable about the field that you wanted to start business in. If you work with your tone, choice of diction, and pace of your speech, I believe that you will be able to persuade your audience with ease.