2. The feedback that stood out to me the most was to work on my pace and tone which I agreed with completely and tried to work on that with this one. What surprised me the most is the feedback that said I presented without hesitation because I definitely felt hesitant while recording.
3. A) my pitch is somewhat memorized. I don't want it to sound like I'm reading from a script so I more try and memorize the main points I want to hit to allow for improvisation. B) I felt more comfortable in front of the camera this time but it's still weird to just talk at a phone by yourself and sound natural. C) I think my pitch was better this time. I tried to improve the hook at the beginning and work on my delivery.
Connor,
ReplyDeleteI can tell that you really put in the work to improve your pitch in the video. I can relate to you that talk to a camera is bizarre and weird. One piece of advice I'll give you is to increase the volume and be more enthusiastic about your idea. However, I think you did a great job on this one.